Sunday, September 6, 2009

Print it landscape and it makes sense.

(1) Sometimes,

(2) When I'm alone,

(3) My company becomes tot'lly

(4) Intolerable, and I try to Escape, In my wind-whipped Jeep,

(5) With the volume so powerful it just might down out everything I do not wish to hear myself say, and all those details, failures,

are blow away. 
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2 comments:

  1. There are six lines in this poem. They don't display correctly in this format, and formatting matters. They begin:
    Sometimes
    When
    My
    Intolerable
    With
    are

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  2. (Remixt)

    Sometimes,
    When I'm alone,
    my company becomes
    Intolerable,

    I try to escape,
    in my wind-whipped Jeep,
    with the volume so powerful
    It just might drown

    Out everything
    I do not wish to hear myself
    say, all those details, failures,
    are blown away.

    (Try reading the lines singly too)

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